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I was undergoing treatment. I got pregnant, even though I was on birth control pills. My oncologist informed me that I would die if I kept the pregnancy. I made a difficult decision and had an abortion. I don't appreciate being judged by women who have never been in my shoes. How would you feel if YOU had to make a life or death decision?
How would your mother feel about burying you because abortion is illegal? How awful you would feel if you couldn't even make a decision for yourself due to laws. If you decide to use pictures of "aborted fetuses", make sure they are real and not just propaganda pictures put out by anti-choice groups. My abortion was at barely 5 weeks...... Please include also a picture of a woman who has bled to death from a self-induced abortion. Glamour magazine published a very moving photo of a dead woman in a pool of blood, you might go look for that.

I assume this is for an English course. You need to have a strong thesis statement at the end of your introduction, and there is currently no thesis to speak of. You are stating facts, rather than introducing what you are trying to persuade the reader to think. Also, you are contradicting yourself. You say abortion should be illegal, yet in the paragraph you say "Yes woman should be able to make their own choices and decisions " Simply put, if abortion were illegal, those who have medical conditions which could kill them during childbirth or whatever would just have to die, or use a clothes hanger to do it themselves, then they'd risk injury to themselves, infection, and maybe not even abort the fetus. First off you need to define what abortion is..
I would say that would make for a better conclusion to your paper. You get an F hahahah 8 people rated this as good by Just Call Me Jenn Member since: May 11, 2007 Total points: 2,883 (Level 4) Add Contact Block I guess i'm the wrong person to ask,i'm prochoice. Member since: August 23, 2007 Total points: 1,487 (Level 3) Add Contact Block NOPE dont like it at all you dont persuade me at all. I think it needs lots and lots of work you need to also address the other side of things. NOT JUST NO NO NO YOU ARE A BAD PERSON. Write about something you know about and have experienced.

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